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Open Poetry #30

Velvet Love(haiku)( For ARH).

Goldenrose
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0 posted 2003-12-11 05:12 AM

Rich velvet heart.

Pride unconfined.

My love so free.

Obscurity
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In A Melancholic Dream

1 posted 2003-12-11 05:14 AM

I thought a haiku was 575... >.<

Goldenrose
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2 posted 2003-12-11 05:24 AM

In Buddhist religion where the Haiku was writen the most...(It is actualy one of THE oldest forms of poetry, going back to early Hindu writing)there are no hard fast rules.
If your just going to be critical for the sake of being critical.......

Goldenrose.

''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity''

[This message has been edited by Goldenrose (12-11-2003 05:27 AM).]

Obscurity
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3 posted 2003-12-11 05:41 AM

I was not being critical at all, thank you very much... I was mearly stating a view that I personafied upon, where as the dominance of haiku poetry was written from the Japanese (whether it be of buddhism or not), and I was personafing the 575 haiku 'rule'... Ok?

A Romantic Heart
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4 posted 2003-12-11 06:40 AM

This was PERFECT....I feel the heart, the love, the emotion from your love, your words.....

great job my love!

~xxxx love mrs. Velvet

True poets don't write with the ink of quill or pen, but with the ink of their heart~

Goldenrose
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5 posted 2003-12-11 06:52 AM

Thank you my love for your words of kindness..it seems some people can say kind words with nit picking...love...

Goldenrose.xxxxxxxxxxxx

''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity''

Goldenrose
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6 posted 2003-12-11 06:59 AM

Obscurity.... Well excuse me all over the place...OK!!!!....you are just splitting hairs....the Buddhist books i read say there is ABSOLUTELY NO reason to stick to the supposed rules...if it comes from the heart then it is a worthy Haiku..no matter how you write it...funny how you do not slag off other poets who write Haiku's..mmm ..i wonder why?....OK?...

Goldenrose.

''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity''

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