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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2003-12-10 04:40 PM

Could I spill the stars to shower gems upon you

Turn the ocean tides to carry you along

Bring the heavens to you with your morning coffee

Tempt the whispers of the woods to play you song

There would be no greater joy that could fulfill me

In the effort it may take to make secure

A foundation for your passage on this journey

To make blessed in this life as dreams endure

For I see in you such qualities worth measure

The most sensual of sculpture acquiesced

For the form a simple shell concealing treasure

Far beyond imagined wealth of human best

In your heart resides a fire ever burning

And I see with such delighted eyes the thrill

The undoubted wonderment divines discerning

In His image such an art of way and will

Could I give enough to warm you through the darkness

Orchestrate the sun to shine for you each day

It would pale within the light you shine about me

Whether you are here with me or far away

Could I find the simple pleasures to astound you

Bring you happiness that shelters any rain

I would give my life for love to but surround you

Giving up all silly note or jealous claim

You belong unto the wilderness beyond me

And in accolades I see you off each flight

For I know that we reside within each other

And I know by heart the curves and vales right

So in keeping with a theme that is the basis

Of the things that matter most to me for sure

Could I put in capsule joy in certain stasis

Certainly this love to thrive inside so pure

Copyright Kkh 12/10/03

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

1 posted 2003-12-10 04:45 PM

just heavenly and devine
and if to keep such beauty as a treasure that doesnt tarnish with time, if only inside, would be sweet

GhostWriter_6
Member

since 2001-09-03

Posts 237
??Amityville??

2 posted 2003-12-10 05:30 PM

enjoyed the read here inked... i figured i would return the feedback because you managed to read one of my pieces... this was definately worth the read......

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

3 posted 2003-12-10 07:36 PM

This was a pleasure to read. hugs, Chris

"At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet."
-Plato

Serena Renae
Junior Member

since 2003-12-04

Posts 48
Ohio, USA

4 posted 2003-12-10 07:56 PM

I enjoyed this poem. It held my attention. Some longer ones tend to lose the interest of the reader, this one didnt at all. Good writing.
Love,
Serena

Obscurity
Member

since 2003-12-04

Posts 153
In A Melancholic Dream

5 posted 2003-12-10 10:35 PM

quote:
In your heart resides a fire ever burning

Awesome, Awesome line... I wish I would have thought of that one

This is definatly worth the read, and Im gonna look up some of your other pieces.

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

6 posted 2003-12-11 09:53 AM

Perfect.

Eric

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2003-12-11 12:45 PM

gosh...this is quite touching...straight from the heart...and a beautiful heart it is

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

8 posted 2003-12-12 01:22 AM

*exquisite* poetry, Kathleen~
A rare gem cannot even compare!!

Happy Holidays and many blessings to you in the New Year.

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