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titch k
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since 2003-11-25
Posts 123


0 posted 2003-12-10 03:43 PM


Even the lifeless,
dress up to meet you
Rose buds cry
with mere sight
You light flames,
in the moons awakening
Fraternizing desire
in the heart of Stars
When man weighs heavy
with new sorrow;
Your muse sings gladness
lightening his heart
You never sell Eternity
short of a farthing
Please take me
dearest Beloved
My soul is yours !

Titch

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GG
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since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532
Lost in thought
1 posted 2003-12-10 06:19 PM


'Rose buds cry with mere sight..'
yes and the rocks cry out.
This is beautiful.

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

icequeen
Senior Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 633
FL USA
2 posted 2003-12-10 07:41 PM


You light flames,
in the moons awakening


ooohhh I wish I'd thought of that line

This is lovely, very romantic, it is. Good job!

Caroline

the only man worth your tears will never make you cry

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

3 posted 2003-12-11 08:32 AM


Lovely write, very awesome lines.

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