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Brad Majors
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0 posted 2003-12-10 07:54 AM




With a poetical smile
you stole my heart
and now my life
will never be the same.

With sultry text
you caress my soul
through the dark
and lonely night
melting the sadness
far away

Our love is far beyond
romantic definition
for you are the soulmate
of dreams

You are the princess
who holds the keys
to my heart
for all eternity

Even if dreams
are all we can ever hope
to be
then may we sleep forever
so you can always be with me.

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LeeJ
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1 posted 2003-12-10 07:57 AM


With sultry text
you caress my soul
through the dark
and lonely night

and I believe my dear Brad, that is what life is all about...love, and creativity...a dream worth dreaming...going way beyond to the deepest part of our internal life...which is emortally penetrating...

A vision you have painted here for all romance of God's will...truer then life itself..or what "we" as mortals have the ability to bestow.  Wonderful write!

Good morning!

HopeS
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2 posted 2003-12-10 08:14 AM


Beautifully written Brad , soulmate dreams , yes I can relate to those

Hope

Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2003-12-10 08:22 AM


Brad,
Very romantic.

ethome
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4 posted 2003-12-10 09:07 AM


Brad
Do I ever love how you end this.......Also I love that "poetical smile" phrase......Clever arrangement and expression of words.

Eric

Brad Majors
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5 posted 2003-12-10 09:21 AM


thank you
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6 posted 2003-12-10 10:31 AM


Dream long, dream sweet, dream often ~ and may they manifest into soul-satisfying reality!

I really enjoyed reading this poem, Brad. I particulary love to read this side to your talent.


EA

GG
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7 posted 2003-12-10 01:54 PM


you know a man is in love when he writes words like this...
and they come out pink
Beautiful.

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

Toerag
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8 posted 2003-12-10 02:13 PM


and..if you want to see your dreams come true...don't sleep...good write
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