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Imajica
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0 posted 2003-12-10 02:23 AM



you’re proud of your actions
but all I see is my father
and im not willing to wait for your rebirth
like my mother for his
maybe it’s the tv and video games that made me impatient
or maybe it’s the lack of any vision of future on your part
because I see much in my own future
the only problem is your absent from it
Im planning what to do after you
more than with you
but im not escaping anytime soon
because despite your faults
you can make me feel like a mountain.

"Is there a superintendent of the spaceship, Luke"
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passing shadows
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1 posted 2003-12-10 03:48 AM


now this...hit very close to home

and feeling like a mountain feels good

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2 posted 2003-12-18 09:03 PM


well laid out, great write

be strong, be proud, be you

-*-*-

Cancer kills us all.  I'm not immortal after all.

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