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Hockeychick19 Member
since 2002-10-29
Posts 430Massachusetts, USA 
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I feel so alone, You tell me you love me, I tell you I love you, But yet you seem aloof. I just want to cry out, And explain everything, But if I do, I’m afraid I might lose you, Lord help me through this, I love him with all my heart, Don’t let us fall apart, I feel so alone. Life is a gift so live it to the fullest! |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
I feel for you... I do. I know how that feels. I am sorry you are sad but you were able to write about it so well. Here is to wishing you good things always  Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Hockeychick19, Saunni's right! You did express your feelings well. You're fortunate to be able to do this--not everyone even knows their own feelings, let alone, how to express them! Thanks for sharing your thoughts. Sadelite |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very sad but I understand well |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
You're never alone. If these are your tears...you cry in beauty. Eric |
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WannabePoet Member
since 2003-12-10
Posts 62New York USA |
I feel your tears, as you portrayed your emotions so vividly. I am a sap for emotional writing. Thank you for sharing. |
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Hockeychick19 Member
since 2002-10-29
Posts 430Massachusetts, USA |
Saunni - I really was sad when I wrote this when I went to type it out all my thoughts just kinda came together and that was the end result. Sadelite - Thank you for being so kind. A lot of time I feel the only way to get out what I'm feeling is to write about it. Thanks for stopping by. Dixie - No one should ever have to feel this way, but on the other hand I'm glad you can understand. Thanks for replying. Eric - (big hugs) Thank you for being so kind. And yes I was on the virge of tears when I wrote this. Thanks for replying. WannabePoet - Thank you I'm glad you liked it. And welcome to Passions. Thank you everyone ~Kelly~ Life is a gift so live it to the fullest! |
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martina Member
since 2003-06-19
Posts 59 |
This one is good too. Martina |
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jord4n Junior Member
since 2003-12-12
Posts 15 |
Good job...i know the feeling...went through that just recently...and i have as well wrote a lot about it. - Jordan |
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