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Bill Charles
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0 posted 2003-12-09 08:05 PM


“OF A POET LONGING”

When I gaze
into softer eyes
of one of passion’s taste
this heart beats faster for you
as we love in a tighter embrace,
yet gentle you are the poet longing,
for your desires are felt from you, as
your hips touch mine in rhythm’s harmony…

This night is gentle
with your passion, as tender
breasts caress my chest, your fingers
touch in places to sigh, and in moonlight mine
trace of you, my lips search out delicate
places of yearning, my search of you
is of your softness, and my
warmth fills you with love’s craving,
for you are of a poet longing…
~~~~
Bill Charles

© Copyright 2003 Bill Charles - All Rights Reserved
Earth Angel
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1 posted 2003-12-09 08:28 PM


Might I be forward enough to say that I actually got tingles reading this poem...

This puts the "ooo" in ooo-la-la!
EA

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2 posted 2003-12-09 08:57 PM


Uhm...what Linda said.  
Nightshade
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3 posted 2003-12-09 09:00 PM


This one sizzles Bill. hugs, Chris

"At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet."
-Plato



    

Kahlil
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4 posted 2003-12-09 09:08 PM


This is so nice, Bill....sigh....~K~
pictureme
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5 posted 2003-12-09 09:25 PM


very nice....liked the flow of the words,
nice style...and it made me feel warm inside.
pictureme :-)

Enchantress
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6 posted 2003-12-09 10:17 PM


My oh my Bill....sizzle and more!
Hugs~

~ Let peace begin with me...   

inkedgoddess
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7 posted 2003-12-09 10:28 PM


a poet of longing, yes i'd say so
so nice to see you here again

passing shadows
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8 posted 2003-12-10 03:55 AM


whew! wow! Lucky lady!
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9 posted 2003-12-10 08:12 AM


what everyone above me has said...and then some...terrific write and read
ethome
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10 posted 2003-12-10 09:05 AM


Bill

Great romantic setting and hot stuff too.
Made me tingle too but don't worry about a thing Bill I'm not looking for a relationship......grin.....Just kidding around.


Good writing.

Eric

James_A_Fraser
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11 posted 2003-12-12 08:52 PM


Excellent. No other word for this, and too far down to have just ten replies.



~~J

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12 posted 2003-12-12 09:18 PM






(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, and may love fill your happy holidays this season, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

BluesSerenade
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13 posted 2003-12-14 11:52 PM


When I gaze
into softer eyes
of one of passion’s taste
this heart beats faster for you

Mmmm, yes, love the longing in this BC~

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