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Kristabell
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since 2003-11-29
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Portland, OR

0 posted 2003-12-09 06:53 PM


Chocolate

Addicting though it may be,
I cannot seem to get it away from me,
So sweet so sweet,
And very good to eat,
That ravishing taste,
I will never let it go to waist,
Running through the halls,
And jumping off the walls,
Annoying all the others,
I suppose that is why we all have mothers.

© Copyright 2003 Kristabell - All Rights Reserved
Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2003-12-09 06:57 PM


LOL, I have a friend who needs to read this one!
THANK you for a fun read.

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
2 posted 2003-12-09 07:30 PM


Oh yes! The chocolate highs! ~ Unfortunately followed by the lows! ~ Which can swing back up to highs with another chocolate fix!

If I indulged my chocolate sweet tooth as much as I would like to, it really would go to "waist"! lol

Warm hugs 'n smilie faces,
Earth Angel

PsychoticBunni
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since 2003-10-03
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Mythical Atlantis
3 posted 2003-12-09 07:43 PM


chocolate!!! CANDY!!!! SUGAR!!!!!! wow, the rush that your writing about chocolate brings me. lol. great piece. makes me think of my next milky way.

Meg

tragedy is cutting your finger. comedy is falling into an open sewer and dying.
-Mel Brooks

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
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highways, & byways, for now
4 posted 2003-12-09 07:55 PM


Kristabell - now I have a craving, for some of that chocolate, sweet it is, yummy...

BC

Bonnie j
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since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588
Ohio
5 posted 2003-12-10 10:24 PM


Greetings,
The Chocolate Monster is in the house. I can smell, taste, hear, touch and see Chocolate.
My other sense is to know when someone writes about Chocolate.Chocolate cake, pies, candy,and even Chocolate Porkchops. May I come to your house for CHOCOLATE?
The Chocolate Monster.

WannabePoet
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since 2003-12-10
Posts 62
New York USA
6 posted 2003-12-10 11:03 PM


*opening a hershey kiss* LoL, very nice write. I had a good laugh. I like your use of "waist" pretty ingenious.
Kristabell
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since 2003-11-29
Posts 678
Portland, OR
7 posted 2003-12-11 10:27 PM


I was wondering who would get that waist thing. lol! Good job. Thanks, I could use some chocolate right about now too!!!
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