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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2003-12-09 06:05 PM


Come Close My Love


I remember how right it
felt to have you near me.

I remember the night you
became my love so clearly.

It was nice that you needed me
as much as I needed you.

Come close my love and I will tell
you how much I still need you.


JamesLee
December07
2003

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2003-12-09 08:55 PM


James, this is so lovely!
Thank you!

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2 posted 2003-12-09 09:02 PM


I agree with Karilea!  Very nice! Chris

"At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet."
-Plato



    

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3 posted 2003-12-09 09:05 PM


Awwww, this is sweet, James.  
Hugs  
Ethel

Hockeychick19
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4 posted 2003-12-09 09:07 PM


James,

This is absolutely beautiful.

~Kelly~

Life is a gift so live it to the fullest!

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