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Wipe my eyes
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Wipe my eyes |
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serenities_blood Member
since 2003-12-21
Posts 56New Zealand |
My heart an open wound Lost and broken I’ll find you near Though pain is resistance I can’t find a reason to let go Bleeding and reaching toward the light This pain is all I can see But life is just too confusing to fight… So wipe my eyes Hold me close Let me feel your bleeding betrayal Let me show you what real pain feels like Let me cry on your pillow Lying and crying I seek my right This hunger is taking over But love is just too confusing to fight… So wipe my eyes Taste my mind with filthy curiosity Rearrange my heart Close your eyes to shield the light Of electric hate and blinding regret Hiding and struggling through the frozen night This hate is suffocating me But everything’s just too confusing to fight… So wipe my eyes. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I thought this deserved a place of its own as well, so I welcome the addition to Open... and yes, I still like the part about filthy curiosity the best. But shaking my head at your choice of name, smile. That one may be a tad too taint. (but time will tell) But I'm okay with it, and I welcome you! Happy holidays. |
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serenities_blood Member
since 2003-12-21
Posts 56New Zealand |
Thank you. My name may seem taint, but all if you look deeper i am actually saying that even the most serene and tranquil things have its faults. ie. the blood explains that everything has an imperfection. My name is only saying that i am that serene imperfection. Thanks anyway! xoxLORxox |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I wasn't implying you were taint, sweetie. ME. smile. "serenities_blood" My apologies for the misunderstanding. |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Hi, and Welcome to Passions. We are glad you have joined our circle of friends, and family…. please check your email for a special greeting Kindly Greeneyes~  ~~**~~**~~**~~**~~ |
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pictureme Member
since 2003-11-28
Posts 248Ohio, USA |
welcome.....I liked how you began with the line "My heart an open wound" The reoccuring lines reminded me too " So wipe my eyes" pictureme :-) |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Welcome to Passions! Love's emotions aren't always warm and tender. You've expressed the painful side well. |
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serenities_blood Member
since 2003-12-21
Posts 56New Zealand |
Wow thanks people! I really do like this site and i can stay on for hours just reading the inspiring poems you guys have to offer. Talent is definatley something you people possess. Cheers agen xoxLORxox |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Welcome to Passions! this is very deep...this aches to the core. i hope you have a happy holiday. amy "When life gives you sorrow, may you experience the spirit of laughter" |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
When I first saw your user name, I wondered if we were welcoming more family of serenity's into Passions...  ...as it is, you have a talent all your own, and I will enjoy following your progress.Welcome to Passions! Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Welcome to Passions. Well written and full of emotion.  "When your life is tossed and turning |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Phenominal write! I see this was your first post and I did not welcome you to PIP here -- that I do now! Glad to read your writing. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
   (big angel hugs) Oh Laura, looking at your screen-name had me thinking of something very similar to how you described it; of Most Precious Blood of Christ and that you have the spiritual blood in your veins and breathe its essence through every heartbeat, I love your name, this is a fabulous debut! Welcome to Passions, sweet Laura, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your wonderful words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Laura, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you But if the bright lights don't receive you You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20 |
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