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the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

0 posted 2003-12-09 01:49 PM


He hunts for the love
Of just one woman
He hunts for years
Until the right one comes

He thought the right one had come
And then she was taken away
Then he started hunting again
Without getting over the one
He thought was right for him

He hunted for years
And found a woman
Just like the one he lost
Little did he know
That 2 years in to the relationship
With the new woman
His past would come to haunt him

Now he loves 2 women
The one from the past
And the one in the presant
And he can't chose
Which one is gonna lose

Now the hunter has turned
Into the hunted
Because of what had happened in the past
As come back to haunt him

Cold hands means a warm heart

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LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

1 posted 2003-12-09 02:07 PM


Unfortunately, they will all lose their hearts to much pain from the selfishness of this.  I wouldn't/couldn't tollerate a man with so little respect for himself...to string two woman along is not love...sorry, but I've been involved in relationships as such and it causes me to be very candid...there is nothing to gain here and nothing which will compliment anyone...

Thank you for writing and sharing...and again, no insult intended, but a very touchy subject with me...as I loath infidelity, to oneself is bad enough, but to others is irresponsible and self absorbed.

Good write and thanks for sharing.

ThunderMage
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since 2002-06-20
Posts 812
Canada
2 posted 2003-12-09 11:25 PM


Warriors always get a bad rap for such things. But it seems nobody's willing to find out the whole story before passing judgement, thus they too hunt the warrior.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!

Saunni
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777
West Virginia
3 posted 2003-12-09 11:33 PM


Oh my... that is awesome how you wrote about that!

Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain.

Sadelite
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since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519

4 posted 2003-12-10 12:11 PM


Now isn't that an interesting perspective?
                      Sadelite

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5 posted 2003-12-10 12:29 PM


Tsk... a sad tale, and a theme with oh so many variations....

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