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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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My muse thinks well, while eyes wear tears Loosened seasons scatter like heroic commotions Where Euphemisms cease to breath and I care not Irrational melodies coast between the here and now Internal advancement smiles inside and out And high fevor attacks all my motivations Serving a balm…between theory and data Colorfully enhancing ghettos of Renaissance Italy Begiling ambiant soundscapes, creating true magic Delusions of grandeur cartwheels, obliging interglactical genre In your face, honest ta goodness hypnotic grooves Like the trance of primordial archtypal oceanic sounds Flying me to the ends of the earth, and beyond Soothing, wichy depths of the ocean… Lighting my birthday candles…with festive duets And piano solos, enhancing the holiday spirit Interpreted by the masters, wrapping me up in easy listening And systems of belief….where the participants of roundtables State their faith like the kiss of death…might seem to explore Loss and potential recovery…buried deeply within the guirks Of personality as God silences my questions Are the critics the champions…muscular bullies? Have I redeemed the time, as an artist of faith, have I redeemed The time? Genuine doubt is not weakness but strength, A willingness to wrestle with the angel of death. I want to wrestle…cause I can only move forward Wounded… As an inlightened intellectual…and so should you! |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Genuine doubt is not weakness but strength, A willingness to wrestle with the angel of death. I want to wrestle…cause I can only move forward Wounded… As an inlightened intellectual…and so should you! Leaving us with genuine thoughts to ponder, dear Lee. You are so talented, my friend.  Hugs to you  Ethel |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ, After tis you can take the weekend off.  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Oh... this is unreal.. this is sooo good!  Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
In your face, honest ta goodness hypnotic grooves Like the trance of primordial archtypal oceanic sounds Flying me to the ends of the earth, and beyond Soothing, wichy depths of the ocean… My fave. Being a simple woman, of simple words, these spoke to the my longing for the natural, soothing, sounds of the sea. |
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