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Open Poetry #30

"repeat"

martiniat8
Senior Member

since 2003-06-21

Posts 897
Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic

0 posted 2003-12-09 10:41 AM

"Repeat after me"

Everyday is a repeat
Every day is a repeat

repeat, after me

there is no hope
when there is nothing to have faith in

there is no faith
when there is nothing to believe in

there is no love
when there is nothing to have faith in

Repeat after me

Everyline is a repeat
Every line is a repeat
of the one before,

of the One before.

Everyday is a repeat
Every day is a repeat

of the one before.

Of the One, before.

Everyline is a repeat.
Every line is a repeat
of the one before.

Of the One before...

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

1 posted 2003-12-09 12:24 PM

I like the way this doubles and triples back on itself, it leaves an impression.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

2 posted 2003-12-10 08:27 AM

Futility simply composed.

dingusjr
Member

since 2003-09-24

Posts 415
Missouri

3 posted 2003-12-10 09:40 AM

Interesting, no doubt...and thought provoking

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2003-12-10 12:58 PM

yep, I sure know this

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