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Kristabell
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0 posted 2003-12-09 08:57 AM



Than I ever was Before

Anger is but another thing,
I feel within this hole,
On and on the tyrant storm rages,
I feel like I am trapped in so many cages.

When I try to drag myself from above the water,
Something else happens,
I fall much further.
Than I ever was before.

Sometimes it is hard,
To cease the comments,
But out they come,
Making the hole bigger than it ever was before,
Sometimes all I can do is wait,
But that does not stop my pain, my suffering.

Maybe I should move to another state,
Start a new life,
But no,
I have everything here,
My home, my family,
My school, my friends,
Why leave them,
When I know,
That I will end up with nothing in the end.



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1 posted 2003-12-09 10:00 AM


well done
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enjoyed
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3 posted 2003-12-09 01:37 PM


This one hurt, Kristi. I felt much emotion in it.
I hope that things get better soon.
Hugs,
Ethel

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4 posted 2003-12-09 02:37 PM


Ouch...but don't believe it.
Kristabell
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5 posted 2003-12-09 05:44 PM


Well, things lately have not been the best so I thought I would right a poem. Thanks! I do not believe it, though. I know I have a lot going for me.
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