to write from the odd side of the half

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Open Poetry #30

to write from the odd side of the half

pandonov
Member

since 2003-10-03

Posts 478
b/w conscience and insolence

0 posted 2003-12-09 03:21 AM

visual.
taste of words beyond the tongue
deeper
in the gray abyss of non-reason

it is shape of lines

the pieces of one
to color the fade of hole into labyrinth.

existing
between
conception and
similarity to conclusion,
the assemble of cry
is art to elude resemblance.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2003-12-09 03:29 AM

I have sat here and read over this for several minutes now...and I fell deeper inside each passing second

pandonov
Member

since 2003-10-03

Posts 478
b/w conscience and insolence

2 posted 2003-12-09 03:42 AM

glad to help

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

3 posted 2003-12-09 07:51 AM

nicely done

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

4 posted 2003-12-16 09:53 PM

Missed this one the first time. Love the stanza:

"existing
between
conception and
similarity to conclusion,
the assemble of cry
is art to elude resemblance."

Nicely done.

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

5 posted 2003-12-17 03:50 PM

Whatever the half... just keep writing. *S* I like this very much! *S*

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

6 posted 2003-12-18 10:56 PM

You balance shape and form, form and substance, words and that which is beyond them.

And you do it well.

~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº>
______________Ratleader______________

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.