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titch k
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0 posted 2003-12-09 12:28 PM



O Restless one, troubled mind
Bearing witness, for heartache;
Itself as ultimate form of reality
Sieze upon resplendant source
the Cosmic order, platonic forms;
The dreams of Brahman

What is needed, the coo of the dove,
the evening breeze; Extended appreciation,
in the world, the 'newness of life;
Without fascination for grandeur
The song of crickets, visionary moments,
that unfold within us as we sleep

There is a difference, I'll speak convincingly
There are many options, many paths
I've lived that day, to tell of this thing;
Showing the living how to make peace
I conquered, learning what true courage is;
Without a shudder, stand up all over

Some day you'll sing, with wondrous thrilling rapture;
In life's stupendous task, and I will be with thee
My spirit is strong and my heart is tranquil,
not only in life's summer; Thus when life
is lonely,  ne'er forgotten; Winged flight;
We're going home together, that's enough!

Titch

Edited by titch on Dec. 08 2003,16:42

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JamesMichael
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1 posted 2003-12-09 05:54 PM


NIce writing...James
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2 posted 2003-12-09 06:47 PM


"What is needed, the coo of the dove,
the evening breeze; Extended appreciation,
in the world, the 'newness of life;"

Very well said! thank you for this write.

Earth Angel
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3 posted 2003-12-09 07:13 PM


"My spirit is strong and my heart is tranquil,"

~ Amen! Another fine write, Dear Titch!


EA

PsychoticBunni
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4 posted 2003-12-09 07:37 PM


very spiritual and uplifting. it really sends a message to the soul. the title sparks an interest too. didja know that a brahman in the hindu culture is the highest social class and the sacred priests?? just thought u might like to know if u didn't already. great write by the way.

Meg

tragedy is cutting your finger. comedy is falling into an open sewer and dying.
-Mel Brooks

titch k
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5 posted 2003-12-10 03:36 PM


hi and thankyou all for response

yes psychobunnie smile
Brahman has an overall meaning my friend of Faith/religion
thankyou
love Titch

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