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Jes
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0 posted 2003-12-08 05:45 PM



There will be another day....
To start up in a way.
You got this crush....
But never live life in a rush.

Seek the heart....
That will be your proven art.
So you will get back....
For just another love attack.

Smile

Jes

This was inspired by PsychotticBunni,and her poem
" Lonely, Cold, December "

[This message has been edited by Jes (12-08-2003 06:08 PM).]

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passing shadows
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displaced
1 posted 2003-12-09 03:17 AM


nice


A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
2 posted 2003-12-09 03:46 AM


Other poets do inspire us~SMILE~

~ARH

True poets don't write with the ink of quill or pen, but with the ink of their heart~

ambrish
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3 posted 2003-12-09 09:08 AM


a nice one
ParisGrl
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4 posted 2003-12-09 10:15 AM


Jes,

very nice poem.

~Laura~

Jes
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5 posted 2003-12-09 11:40 AM


Smile

Thanks all but the wow goes to PsycothicBunny

Glad you all enjoyed

Jes


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