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PsychoticBunni
Member

since 2003-10-03

Posts 162
Mythical Atlantis

0 posted 2003-12-08 05:01 PM

I vowed that I'd remember
But I don't want to anymore
These few days in December
Have cost more than I've bargained for.

Maybe it was something
That I said or did
Maybe more than one thing
But I am just a kid

A kid who had a crush
And made her dream come true
But gone now is that rush
And also gone is you

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2003-12-08 05:35 PM

Especially liked your first verse,
and the rush of loving!

Made me feel like a kid at heart,
guess there is a little of that in all of us.

Nice~

Jes
Member

since 2003-10-21

Posts 422
Denmark

2 posted 2003-12-08 05:42 PM

Smile

There will be another day....
To start up in a way.
You got this crush....
But never live life in a rush.

Seek the heart....
That will be your proven art.
So you will get back....
For just another love attack.

Smile, You inspired mee here, hope it was ok.

Jes

Snowflake From Hell
Senior Member

since 2003-07-10

Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion

3 posted 2003-12-08 06:46 PM

love can be harsh as a cold december breeze but it can be just the opposite too...nicely drawn out on both sides good job

I see the end of the ride murder suicide is how I'm feeling lately -Disturbed-

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2003-12-08 06:48 PM

Nice...James

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

5 posted 2003-12-08 08:17 PM

PsychoticBunni - a December told, of a time ago... Nice write...

BC

PsychoticBunni
Member

since 2003-10-03

Posts 162
Mythical Atlantis

6 posted 2003-12-08 08:31 PM

thanks for the comfort guys. you make me feel all warm and fuzzy inside. :excorcist:

Meg

tragedy is cutting your finger. comedy is falling into an open sewer and dying.
-Mel Brooks

GG
Member Elite

since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

7 posted 2003-12-08 10:22 PM

decembers always are....
I like it

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

titch k
Member

since 2003-11-25

Posts 123

8 posted 2003-12-09 12:26 PM

beautiful....simply beautiful!
love Titch

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

9 posted 2003-12-09 02:55 AM

very sad, but also beautiful

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