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Jes
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Denmark

0 posted 2003-12-08 03:22 PM



The thought to do ----> Without to think.
The way we go ----> Without to walk.
The mood to laugh ----> Without to smile.
The sound of music ----> Without to listen.
The wave of love ----> Without to feel.
The touch of me ----> Without to be.

Is it like to go away ----> So we can be able to stay.

Smilng in my thoughts ----> Sending it out is how I was taught.

So come along and live ----> Its a game of feel and forgive.

So simply is love ----> And that is all what is above.

Happy smiling inside, feeling life comming back, with each step.

Jes


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PsychoticBunni
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Mythical Atlantis
1 posted 2003-12-08 05:11 PM


full of controversy and strangeness is love. you explain it perfectly in your work. loved it.

Meg

tragedy is cutting your finger. comedy is falling into an open sewer and dying.
-Mel Brooks

Jes
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Denmark
2 posted 2003-12-08 05:59 PM


Smile

Thanks for ya reply, yes love is full of controversy but, isnt it that what makes us currios on it, - smile and thanks for posting, Meg


Jes


passing shadows
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3 posted 2003-12-09 03:14 AM


I love this Jes!
Jes
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Denmark
4 posted 2003-12-09 11:44 AM


Yes smiling it has a special rythm it has to be told first wery fast then abit lower, can nearby not talk it taht fast lol cause im a dane smile.

But yes it tells abit about life, I started writing my book in danish as i feel over a few words, and this was what i got out of them.

Smile

Jes


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