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Allysa
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In an upside-down garden

0 posted 2003-12-08 03:13 PM


I do not speak your language,
understanding only when you make up your mind-
it's too hard for me to comprehend
exactly what it is you want for me.

I see myself in you,
but also myself in another-
should I explore all options
before considering a final decision?

Could you understand
that he is a part of me now,
he is someone I could see myself with,
at least for a little while.

But that doesn't mean
that the same doesn't apply
to you.

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Jes
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since 2003-10-21
Posts 422
Denmark
1 posted 2003-12-08 03:37 PM


Sometimes we need to stumble for to learn to rise.

Thank you smile, im in the same position though, i will make the try, to see if we fit. Else i can never say if i should have tried or not.

Smile - I liked the thoughts behind.

Jes


PsychoticBunni
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since 2003-10-03
Posts 162
Mythical Atlantis
2 posted 2003-12-08 05:16 PM


no one understands us. we don't even understand each other. confusion seems the only way sometimes doesn't it?? i wish it were different.

Meg

tragedy is cutting your finger. comedy is falling into an open sewer and dying.
-Mel Brooks

SuperGlueRyan
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since 2003-06-16
Posts 45
Possum Kingdom
3 posted 2003-12-09 02:24 AM


This person is just as confused as you are, but willing to support what decisions you feel that you need to make. He wouldn't dare hold you back, even at the cost of his own loss.

~Ryan

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