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skyshine
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Beneath the northern stars

0 posted 2003-12-08 09:06 AM



Looking back on all the events that have happened throughout the years
I remember with a smile both the laughter and the tears.
The good times and the bad times--I have not one regret
All things happen for a reason, no one's proven me wrong yet.
Some people come into your life and you don't want them to leave
They always will stay with you, if you just believe.
Like an angel by your side, they stay within your heart
So no matter how far away you go, you're never far apart.
I'm sorry there were bad things--there was a lot I didn't see
I guess that nothing's perfect and that nothing will ever be.
Tomorrow is a new day with the rising of the sun
The world will continue to turn, 'cause that's how things are done.
I'll always be there for you, though you may not want me to be
But that is something that won't change, just because that's me.
No matter what's going on with you, don't think I won't notice or care
'Cause nothing you do will stop me from always being there.

~sky

12-7-03



Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone...
~Jewel

[This message has been edited by skyshine (12-08-2003 09:33 AM).]

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1 posted 2003-12-08 09:13 AM


This is absolutely beautiful!
May I keep this?  I love it!!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~ Let peace begin with me...

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2 posted 2003-12-08 09:14 AM


skyshine
Very nice, enjoyed the read.

skyshine
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3 posted 2003-12-08 09:30 AM


Thank you Nancy and Seymour! Nancy of course you can keep it--that really made me smile. I'm so glad you liked it. Thanks again, both of you!

~sky

Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone...
~Jewel

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4 posted 2003-12-08 09:39 AM


I'll always be there for you, though you may not want me to be
But that is something that won't change, just because that's me.
No matter what's going on with you, don't think I won't notice or care
'Cause nothing you do will stop me from always being there.


Sky, this is what real love is about. I love this,
and am keeping it, too, if you don't mind.
Hugs  
Ethel


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5 posted 2003-12-08 11:28 AM


Just Wonderful

Thanks

~Angie

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6 posted 2003-12-08 11:52 AM


now THAT is strength!

I like it!

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7 posted 2003-12-08 01:59 PM


You guys are all so sweet, I don't mind at all if you keep it! It was really nice of you guys to ask. that really made me smile! and passing shadows, your comment meant a lot because I have always tried to be a strong person so I'm glad to hear it showed through in my writing. Ethel, your comment meant a lot too. This poem was for my friend who won't be going to school with us anymore, and I was trying not to cry when I gave him this. Once again thanks very much to all of you!

~sky

Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone...
~Jewel

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8 posted 2003-12-10 08:18 PM


sky,

this really showed a lot of strength
and love...you have such a beautiful
heart and a wonderful talent!
take care,
amy

"love is like a butterfly--
if you chase it,
it will surely fly away,instead
hold it close and watch it grow into
something beautiful"
~me~

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9 posted 2003-12-13 01:20 PM


Your thoughts give way to much love
and a sense of caring that will always remain.

Wonderful poem, skyshine~

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10 posted 2003-12-13 04:29 PM


nice read
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11 posted 2003-12-13 07:54 PM


Yanno the best part of a friend is that they let you tell them to get lost and they never do!  This was awesome - wish it was a card, I would buy it!  Merry Christmas to you and, psst, love the angel page
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