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the ant
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since 2003-11-30
Posts 18
ca, usa

0 posted 2003-12-08 01:47 AM


I wrote a story one night
it was cold and lonely
it was filled with sorrow
lines like in the face of tomorrow

I took off in flight
inside my mind once more
all I found behind that door
was sleepy horror

Unwilling to wake
I was lost in a bad sleep
Invisible to most
and I felt very weak

Similar beings like me
feel the need to escape
but should realize
all diamonds shine
from that heat



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chinesestone
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since 2003-06-04
Posts 76
China
1 posted 2003-12-08 01:52 AM


so sad:<
PsychoticBunni
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since 2003-10-03
Posts 162
Mythical Atlantis
2 posted 2003-12-08 05:24 PM


don't worry about it. whatever you're worrying about that is. the mind is a vast and complex space, and yours seems to be particularly poetic.

Meg

tragedy is cutting your finger. comedy is falling into an open sewer and dying.
-Mel Brooks

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