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BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside

0 posted 2003-12-08 12:43 PM



~*~

A kind gesture leaves a warm smile
a little something that gladdens the heart
simply by taking the time
is a gift to me
when I least expected it
for the silence is all too familiar
when the night settles down
what has become my forever companion
stirring the mourning hours
save for the smile you left for me.

~*~

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WhiteRose
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1 posted 2003-12-08 12:53 PM


A beautiful write. A smile has the magic to make the dark a little less alone.
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2 posted 2003-12-08 01:00 AM


Sometimes that's the only gift that's possible -- how lucky for us that it's just about the best one. It rewards the giver and the receiver as well.

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chinesestone
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3 posted 2003-12-08 01:08 AM


smile can warm your heart

EagleOne
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4 posted 2003-12-08 02:09 AM


The simple gifts of time and a smile are two of the greatest gifts of all. Just a few short years ago a dear friend showed me that sunshine and smiles can make the world go around. I trust you will have copious quantities of both. Take care!

"A spring shower was cause to run
Until you twirled me in the rain" ~ BDC

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5 posted 2003-12-08 02:12 AM


I know of those hours and the silence

Hugs

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6 posted 2003-12-08 03:14 AM


Thought I would like to leave you something for the morning Bluesy, and it's a little  

[This message has been edited by Mysteria (12-08-2003 03:14 AM).]

BluesSerenade
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7 posted 2003-12-08 01:02 PM


Hi there WhiteRose~ A little less alone, you are so right!
Good to see you here and thank you.

Ed~ Sometimes it may be the only gift, but it is a priceless one,
and those are the best kind.  Hugs and all that!  

Thanks for reading chinesestone, warm the heart it did, indeed.

Eddie~  Thank you for your sweet inspire, and your thoughtful reply.

Yes, the hours have been known to drag,
and that is exactly why the little things mean so much.
Thank you Dixie~

You are so sweet, thanks for leaving that for me!
Back at you Mysteria~  

littlewing
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8 posted 2003-12-08 04:14 PM


Bluesy?

I always try to smile
it means everything
beautiful writing
*smile*
see?

Martie
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9 posted 2003-12-08 04:17 PM


Lori...A smile given is wonderful, and recognized makes it double.  
BluesSerenade
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10 posted 2003-12-08 06:01 PM


Hi tweets,  and thanks for sharing your smile.
As you said, it means everything!  I see see!!  

Martie~ Yep, it takes such little effort
and has a way of chasing the blues away.
Hugs you~

HopeS
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11 posted 2003-12-08 10:52 PM


They give a warming loving touch
Yes I agree smiles can do so much !!!

Hope

Enchantress
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12 posted 2003-12-08 10:56 PM


A smile can mean so much...
and yet it is so easy to give.
Love this Bluesy!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~ Let peace begin with me...

Saunni
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13 posted 2003-12-08 11:29 PM


This is so good and so beautiful!

Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain.

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14 posted 2003-12-14 05:36 PM








(smiles) Yay! Oh Lori, you made my heart smile with your gorgeous gift, sweet friend, yay, aren't smiles just the best gift ever, yay, I send smiley angel hugs your way, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lori, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

Antonio_L
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15 posted 2003-12-14 06:59 PM


That was really nice Lori,
made me feel good.

Tony.  

[This message has been edited by Antonio_L (12-14-2003 07:01 PM).]

iliana
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16 posted 2003-12-15 12:42 PM


It's good to be reminded of how important our small gestures can be, and Bluesy, you did it so beautifully.  


Earth Angel
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17 posted 2003-12-15 12:50 PM


Lori, for one who has the smile of all smiles, yours surely would beget many a smile in return.

To give a smile to another, is to gift oneself as well, for it usually is returned to us. I am happy for you that you received that smile that was so special for you. You deserve it, Dear Lori!

~ May all your "mourning" hours become filled with loving smiles for you.

'n smiles,
Linda


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18 posted 2003-12-15 12:56 PM


And sometimes such gifts make all the difference in the world. *S*

Lovely, dear lady. *S*

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19 posted 2003-12-15 01:42 PM


Sometimes a smile is worth more than the giver could ever imagine. Hugs of the season to you dear Bluesylady! Chris

"At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet."
-Plato



    

Gentle Spirit
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20 posted 2003-12-15 01:52 PM


simply by taking the time
is a gift to me
when I least expected it

Lori, we are very simpatico in our thoughts on this....usually the greatest gifts of all are those that are the most simple.  Thank you for this heart write dear girl.  HUGS

LeeJ
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21 posted 2003-12-15 03:02 PM


beautifully thought and expressed
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22 posted 2003-12-15 09:51 PM


Lovely Lady....you are just that....I hope your holidays are filled with love peace and happiness....you deserve each one and more.....love you lady
Lauren~


~~**~~**~~**~~**~~
May the miracle of
Christmas touch your
life with special blessing

H A P P Y  H O L I D A Y S





[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (12-15-2003 10:42 PM).]

Aimster
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23 posted 2003-12-16 09:11 AM


Where am I when things this beautiful
get posted?? Sorry I'm late...this is
absoulutely breathtaking though, esp
that last line! you have such a wonderful
wonderful heart Lori...don't ever change!
happy holidays,
Amy

"love is like a butterfly--
if you chase it,
it will surely fly away,instead
hold it close and watch it grow into
something beautiful"
~me~

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