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vlraynes
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0 posted 2003-12-07 08:14 PM



~*Winter's Canvas*~

The days grow short and Christmas rounds the bend
As Old Man Winter dons his robe of white
Lone chipmunk scurries gathering his feast
While year's last robin finally heads south

With nightfall, moon appears in perfect shine
Casts eerie glow 'pon nature's work of art
Frail branches bent 'neath weight of winter's shawl
Play shadows 'cross the rooftops down below

The scent of chimneys' exhale fills the air
As streetlamps spotlight snowflake pirouettes
A distant carol warms a chilling heart
While icicles cling bravely to the eves

In silence now the world lies fast asleep
Awaiting gentle nudge of morning light
When Sun with fingers warm shall tease the earth
And brush a shimmer 'cross the icy ground

'Tis Mother Nature's masterpiece in play
A nightly curtain call for those before


~Vicky L. Raynes


*Reposted for the Holiday Season

When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix

© Copyright 2003 Vicky L. Raynes - All Rights Reserved
garysgirl
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1 posted 2003-12-07 08:33 PM


Vicky, this is beautiful. I'm so glad that
you reposted it. I may not see snow but every
blue moon here in Florida, but I love seeing
it through the eyes of you poets who do!!
Miss you, my friend  
Hugs and love,
Ethel

ThisDiamond
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2 posted 2003-12-07 08:47 PM


So aptly described Val..
Nice imagery here.
Good to read you again.
TD

inkedgoddess
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3 posted 2003-12-07 09:21 PM


sure seems like this todayin the northeast, loved these images
Enchantress
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4 posted 2003-12-07 09:34 PM


A beautiful wintry canvas you have painted for us Vicky.
Very very much enjoyed this timely piece.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~ Let peace begin with me...

Martie
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5 posted 2003-12-07 10:05 PM


Vicky...just lovely, this poem, and you!  Hugs!
littlewing
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6 posted 2003-12-08 03:54 PM


ahh Vicky . . .
for having never been to Bflo
you have accurately described
a winter morning
just beautiful me sis
*smile*

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7 posted 2003-12-14 05:40 PM








(smiles) Yay! Oh Vicky, we got our first big snowstorm in Colorado last week and it was was a relief considering we usually get our first frost in September! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, there's nothing magical like a white Christmas, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vicky, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

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8 posted 2003-12-14 06:00 PM


Vicky~
This is gorgeous~
Love you, lil buddy~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
         noles1@totcon.com

WhtDove
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9 posted 2004-01-11 12:44 PM


I just happen to know we still have that Winter Canvas here! Great description!

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I don't question YOUR existance- GOD

dgvarner
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10 posted 2004-01-20 10:11 PM


Have missed reading you!  This is very cool

lv,g

"Now would you mind if I bared my soul / If I came right out and said you're beautiful..."  B. Adams

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