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titch k
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since 2003-11-25
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0 posted 2003-12-07 06:58 PM



my dearly beloved you look at me,
   with the chasteness, of a moonflower;
etched in the red thin-sky
  there is no tomorrow in my heart;

your love swallows, with the rush
  of all drifting worlds;
fixed with shooting stars
   and the infinity of space;

clouds conceived, between promise
   of Autumn and Springtime;
as she bathes blossoms, a nod and a bow
  no-one paying ransom;

fragrant blooms, borne with childish mind;
  from tears, and sadness free;
every pleasant sight beneath
  every shared ache, with honeyed reverance;

as the Gods yearn mountaintops;  clothed in clover;
   midst holy isles of bright divinity;
Congratulations oh silent lover, whose gentle gust;
My spirit rushed together, at the touching of your lips

Titch


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maximillian
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since 2003-09-13
Posts 23

1 posted 2003-12-07 07:53 PM


Very 'up in the clouds' romance, above and beyond the true realisms of love by the creation of the wanted experience of it. The peak of it, portrayed by your mountaintops.

Inspirational effort Titch.

titch k
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since 2003-11-25
Posts 123

2 posted 2003-12-08 06:47 AM


hello thankyou for reading me
SMILE
my beloved is universal love in this instance, and very much as portrayed., when the heart chakra truly opens itself...aint it bliss?
love Titch

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