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exhale
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since 2003-06-13
Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

0 posted 2003-12-21 10:26 PM


walking away
with my back turned to you
so you can't see me cry
so you can't see what you mean to me
everything
whispers in the night
i love you's
from lost loves
broken hearts
screaming for love
begging for it
is that my destiny?
just another lost soul


"Hello,my name is Destiny.."

[This message has been edited by exhale (12-21-2003 10:33 PM).]

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Kahlil
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since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881

1 posted 2003-12-21 10:29 PM


ouch, I feel your pain, I really do.  You captured it well in your writing. Of course, you know you're not a lost soul, but that is how it feels right now.  Give it time.  Take care.  ~K~
Kahlil
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since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881

2 posted 2003-12-21 10:30 PM


...came back to put this into my library... ~K~
Kazeru
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since 2003-12-16
Posts 31

3 posted 2003-12-21 10:35 PM


it's a harsh feeling, being lost with nothing you can do, I hope everything turns out right for you... Take care!
Greetz
Kazeru

->Be thy angels? Nay We are just men!<-

Sadelite
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since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519

4 posted 2003-12-21 10:42 PM


walking away
with my back turned to you
so you can't see me cry
so you can't see what you mean to me


braver and kinder than I was once upon a time... This was good write, causing memories to surface.  Take care.
                       Sadelite  

[This message has been edited by Sadelite (12-21-2003 10:44 PM).]

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