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The Dance |
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eringobraugh Junior Member
since 2003-12-06
Posts 16Michigan |
My first post. I struggle just to comprehend the fact my mind is on the mend but how did it get broken is the question of the day and when you answer that one dear the next thing that I’d like made clear is how’d they ever know that it was broken anyway cause when it comes to flesh and bone they wrap it up and send you home and maybe have you take a little aspirin for the pain but if the trouble’s in the head they go to psychotropes instead acceptable procedure to repair a fractured brain so back to where I started here a broken leg to me seems clear a splint a cast a bandage all are easy to discern but if it’s minds they look to fix they’ve got a deeper bag of tricks all seemingly transparent should be reason for concern yea I would like to see the break or share decisions that they make cause who are they to say that I’m in need of such repair mechanically I seem just fine though they have said I cross the line but how else can I ever hope to get from here to there so feigning acquiescence I will sit and watch as time goes by while staring out a window that looks straight into my soul I’ll nod when they expect a yes but they could never hope to guess I’m dancing through dementia on my way to self control |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS! I very much enjoyed your first post here. Sounds as though you are doing the dance of life. I look forward to seeing more of your work. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~ Let peace begin with me... |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
BRAVO! I love this POV! Welcome to Passions. I will certainly look for more from your pen. (BTW, your pen name is cool too)   [This message has been edited by Midnitesun (12-07-2003 11:14 AM).] |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
eringobraugh - an excellent write of the inner self, my best to you... BC |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Welcome to Passions, Please check your email for a special greeting. Very much enjoyed your first post. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
eringobraugh.......I enjoyed this first post...welcome to Passions! I think I've danced the same dance...even the music sound familiar. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
loved it...especially the rhythm... I could almost sing it  Welcome, A. Michael M [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (12-07-2003 12:18 PM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
love your style! I know what you talk about, having a broken mind...and dancing through to self-control a great first post! I'm looking for more! Welcome! |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Welcome to Passions. So glad I caught your first post... Quite a classy entrance I must say...and a humbling talent as well. Smiling at the content. You will never know how you spoke to me. ThisDiamond |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Welcome! A very touching piece. I've been told it's all in my head. No kidding! Unfortunately whats in my head seems different than whats in everyone elses, and there in lies the problem I guess. An interesting read. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Welcome to the Passions family ! Enjoyed your first post~ Have worn these tapshoes before as well !! Chris  "At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet." |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
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eringobraugh Junior Member
since 2003-12-06
Posts 16Michigan |
I want to thank each and every one of you for your kindness and warm thoughts. This is a site that I hope to be frequenting for a good bit of time from here on out. I also must say that this has some of the best reads that I have experienced in a long long while. Thank you again, and hopefully this will not be my last post. |
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