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the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
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Jacksonville, Florida, USA

0 posted 2003-12-06 11:15 PM


once I was an angel up above
Then I fell in love
And I came to earth
To be with my one and only

Little did I know
That I would be banished
To the earth forever
And my halo and wings
I shall never have again

An angel no more
Is what I am
All because
I fell in love

Cold hands means a warm heart

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ThunderMage
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since 2002-06-20
Posts 812
Canada
1 posted 2003-12-06 11:18 PM


I still see your wings and halo. If love banishes angels from Heaven, then none should ever get there in the first place.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!

Ratleader
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since 2003-01-23
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2 posted 2003-12-07 01:16 AM


Happy to play the role of teacher here....

.....love is what angels do. If you love, guess what....!?!

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Snow
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desert flower looking for rain
3 posted 2003-12-07 01:50 AM



this is really
such a tender read..

i enjoyed it.
snow

"...why does my skeleton pursue me
if my soul has fallen away?"
~p.neruda


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