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titch k
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0 posted 2003-12-06 08:29 PM



And great heaven came
resembling her appearance,
either in nothing, or in all;

Leaps in skye, a scrolling up
All worlds sing in her honour,
sharing similar destinies;

To her, is boundless love
and she lives nearby
Superstitious lore, clever cupid;

And mother of several important Gods
Glorious Autumn goes by as fast,
barely, yet producing phenomena;

Choices and Karma, suckling babes
Loves breast, forever rewarding
Giving, what you are thinking about!

Heavens, I was a little deceived
myself at times; Dumped on
That I could just lay my hands on her!

Titch


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Beneath the northern stars
1 posted 2003-12-06 11:50 PM


I liked this, and the title really drew me in!

~sky

Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone...
~Jewel

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By the Seaside
2 posted 2003-12-08 07:05 PM


Heavens, I was a little deceived
myself at times; Dumped on

It is hard to tell which way the wind blows!
But I think I get it now!!  

*enjoyed*



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