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As The Snow Falls
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As The Snow Falls |
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Hockeychick19 Member
since 2002-10-29
Posts 430Massachusetts, USA 
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This beautiful white blanket covers the ground, All you can hear is the wind’s soothing sound, The trees are bare, All I want to do is look up in the sky and stare, As the snow falls. I have one wish as I sit here alone, And that is to have you near, Whispering sweet nothings in my ear, As we cuddle and snuggle tight, Throughout the long wintery night, As the snow falls. Life is a gift so live it to the fullest! |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Kelly Oh how I wish I could experience a winter with snow. Here in Melbourne, Australia we don't have snow in Winter and there's no chance of a white Christmas because our Christmas is in the middle of Summer and is often really hot. At least I can imagine what it would be like through your words. Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hi kelly, Like Sue, I don't see snow here in florida either....well, maybe once in a while. But even then, it melts really fast. So, I also will see it through yours and the others eyes. A good poem.  Hugs  Ethel |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Hi Kelly, WOW! Ain't this storm a doozy? Supposed to get about 2 feet in our neck of the woods! Nice writing ... hugs and hope you can snuggle by a cozy fire ... Marti 'You cannot shake hands with a clenched fist.' |
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Hockeychick19 Member
since 2002-10-29
Posts 430Massachusetts, USA |
Sue - I'm glad you enjoyed the poem... Maybe you can visit the U.S. sometime and enjoy the snow. Ethel - I'm glad you liked the poem... I've always wanted to live in Flordia, so maybe you and I could switch places and you could come live in MA instead.  Marti - Yes this storm is horrible... almost lost electricity a few times here. We're supposed to get approx. 18-30 inches I think. Anywho, I'm glad you like the poem... I liked yours too. Thank you everyone ~Kelly~ Life is a gift so live it to the fullest! |
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wintertao Member
since 2003-11-17
Posts 366Okaloosa Island, FL |
lovely  ) |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Kelly, you paint a very pretty picture here! Sounds like the perfect way to spend a long wintry night!  Warm hugs 'n smiles, Linda P.S. It was good to see your face smiling back at me!  |
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Kristabell Senior Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 678Portland, OR |
I love this poem. It has a great message. It needs to snow here!! There is not a white blanket here, nor someone to wisper sweet nothings iether. I agree, life, you must live it. My favorite quote is "A day without laughter, is a day waisted." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
love the mood |
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Hockeychick19 Member
since 2002-10-29
Posts 430Massachusetts, USA |
Wintertao - I'm glad you liked it and thanks for stopping by. Linda - I agree with you Thanks for taking the time to read this poem.Kristabell - Thanks for replying... I'm glad you liked it. Dixie - I loved the mood I was in when I wrote it too. Thank you everyone ~Kelly~ Life is a gift so live it to the fullest! |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Beautiful...soft and tender as the first snow of the year. Great job! Eric |
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Hockeychick19 Member
since 2002-10-29
Posts 430Massachusetts, USA |
Eric, Thank you... I'm glad you liked it. ~Kelly~ Life is a gift so live it to the fullest! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
That would be nice...as they say in a winter wonderland...James |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I love snow!! The more the better! Love your poem as well! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~ Let peace begin with me... |
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Hockeychick19 Member
since 2002-10-29
Posts 430Massachusetts, USA |
James, Yes it would be nice... If only those visions could come true. ~Kelly~ Life is a gift so live it to the fullest! |
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Hockeychick19 Member
since 2002-10-29
Posts 430Massachusetts, USA |
Nancy, I'm glad you like my poem ... I love the snow as long as I'm not out in it.~Kelly~ Life is a gift so live it to the fullest! |
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martina Member
since 2003-06-19
Posts 59 |
this is one of your best ones yet. Keep it up girl. Martina |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Hope the intended reads this, and snuggles with you on a snowy night. A good write. |
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