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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2003-12-06 01:10 PM

As we step in open meadows
Fingertips connect a trembled distance
I seek no fame…a locket for my chain
Instead the shed of all resistance, watering in longings rain
Faith has called us here in blend, its lingered send
Where pink and purple sunrise will surround us
Your tenderness upon my face where love has found us
Watching in your eyes the boundless romp within tall grasses
To open fields of me, as beauty thrives and mourning passes
And all around the peaceful sound of dawns well singing
A thoughtful gait, articulate the moments clinging
To sip the nectars of the blooms of me you blossom
In bouquet within your arms
As woodland scents the air made awesome
So delicate the weave of spirit spoken in sensations token
And keepsake rare, my soul to share and shimmer dawn
Within the calm explore delightful, and tongued insightful
Brushing lips upon the sun you glow
Within the purest parts of me I know
And all the ground I’ve lost, in taking airs first frost
To melt into a droplet left within the spring
Rising lace across the graceful falls fledged nest and wing

Copyright Kkh 12/06/03

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2003-12-06 01:12 PM

amazing imagery

I'm in awe

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

2 posted 2003-12-06 02:16 PM

Awesome imagery. Very beatiful poem.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2003-12-06 02:19 PM

Beautiful as always Kathleen.
Hugs~

~ Let peace begin with me...

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

4 posted 2003-12-06 09:25 PM

To open fields of me, as beauty thrives

And all the ground I’ve lost, in taking airs first frost
To melt into a droplet left within the spring

Particularly loved these lines....love
them all...the eye's upon ya.

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

5 posted 2003-12-06 09:33 PM

TD...You keep on doing this exquisite thing...wish you would teach me how! Hugs!

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

6 posted 2003-12-06 11:13 PM

this was, to me...
a rather sensual read..
(hope i'm not the only one who saw that. lol)

nicely done.

snow

"...why does my skeleton pursue me
if my soul has fallen away?"
~p.neruda

pictureme
Member

since 2003-11-28

Posts 248
Ohio, USA

7 posted 2003-12-06 11:15 PM

great description...painting a piece of art in words.
pictureme

eringobraugh
Junior Member

since 2003-12-06

Posts 16
Michigan

8 posted 2003-12-06 11:50 PM

My first time on this board, and boy did I pick a good read to start with. The last four lines are breathtaking, and in general, I loved the piece.

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