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Open Poetry #30

Don’t Read The End First ….for icebox

1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-12-06 10:35 AM

Don’t Read The End First ….for icebox

in the middle
of my insecurities
you arrived
and showed me
that no weakness
is too great
to destroy
we go on
flipping through
blank pages
hoping to find
ink that
does not disappear
maybe you are right
this journey
is worth the travel
and there are pages
yet to be written

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

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California

1 posted 2003-12-06 10:40 AM

Helen

"this journey
is worth the travel
and there are pages
yet to be written"

Indeed!

Edder
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since 2003-04-02

Posts 671

2 posted 2003-12-06 10:48 AM

If we're lucky there will be many more from your pen.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

3 posted 2003-12-06 12:58 PM

awesome!

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

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By the Seaside

4 posted 2003-12-11 11:03 AM

This is lovely Helen,
I like the reference to ink that does not disappear.

Keep on writing your heartfelt poetry
and expressing yourself so beautifully.

Enjoyed, as always~

WannabePoet
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since 2003-12-10

Posts 62
New York USA

5 posted 2003-12-11 11:52 AM

Excellent symbolism. And yes, there are many pages to be written, and songs to be sung before the end of our glorious journeys. Thank you for sharing.

icebox
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since 2003-05-03

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in the shadows

6 posted 2003-12-11 05:55 PM

Kaoru

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since 2003-06-07

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where the wild flowers grow

7 posted 2003-12-11 09:16 PM

Awesome!

Ratleader

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Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

8 posted 2003-12-11 09:36 PM

Maybe....maybe some day....

....you will find someone who will at least read the beginning....which appears not to have happened yet. I hope that.

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James_A_Fraser
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since 2003-09-03

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Out Making Anticlines

9 posted 2003-12-12 08:34 PM

Ink that does not disappear. So well put. So very well said indeed.

~~J

WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23

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somebody's dungeon

10 posted 2003-12-12 11:03 PM

Very nicely done.

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

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Gaia

11 posted 2003-12-12 11:57 PM

a great read, Helen

yes, the icebox is full of wisdom

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