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the ant
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since 2003-11-30
Posts 18
ca, usa

0 posted 2003-12-06 05:29 AM



White and cold
The walls are closing in
And I cant find
Where im suppose to go
Or where I’ve been

I am lost
In this maze
Some call life
Some call home
I’d like to call my own

I ask many
And many don’t know
Nobody has the answers
I think they, too
Are all alone

Time moves on
I am still lost
Apparently from the start
Our lives will fall apart
If we don’t live
Each day from the heart

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passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
1 posted 2003-12-06 01:10 PM


true, very true
the_loner_23
Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
2 posted 2003-12-06 02:17 PM


This is a very truthful poem.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
3 posted 2003-12-06 02:24 PM


Wow!  How true this is!
Hugs~

~ Let peace begin with me...

bgryan
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since 2003-06-16
Posts 30
North Ireland
4 posted 2003-12-06 03:01 PM


I really like this,well written,well done.
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