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the ant
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since 2003-11-30
Posts 18
ca, usa

0 posted 2003-12-06 04:46 AM


Hold on
not too tight
If so, run
we'll be alright

Holding on
letting go
Which to do?
Time isn't slow

Subtle distractions
leave us wanting more
Stay on course
and settle the score

Sit down
Chill for awhile
Contemplate life
and you may end up
with a smile

If its a frown
you wear
think about one
That one that cares

If that doesn't work
just try it
Picture yourself
in comparison
to the pleasant air

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passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
1 posted 2003-12-06 01:14 PM


good thoughts
Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945
Texas, USA
2 posted 2003-12-06 04:08 PM


Sometimes nothing works, but it can't hurt to try, right? I like the feeling in this one.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~
3 posted 2003-12-06 06:04 PM


I liked the upbeat outlook! Good one!!
Love,
Terri~


Well I will go down with this ship
And I won't put my hands up and surrender...Dido

[This message has been edited by SharaRose (12-06-2003 06:06 PM).]

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