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SuperGlueRyan
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0 posted 2003-12-06 03:19 AM


I remember when you were my world and I was yours,
We danced our celestial dance,
Never daring to get too close.
Do you know what it's like to be held up to be knocked down?
Do you know what it's like to be the King of your world one day, the court jester the next?
Do you know what it's like to see the truth, but refuse to accept it, because just maybe your wrong?
Do you know what it's like to love someone when they walk away with out saying "Good-bye" or anything at all?
Does it hurt you too when they are suddenly facinated by some one else, when your just their aquaintence?
When the past is forgotten and the times together are ignored?
When you're left wondering what you did or didn't do?
Then perhaps you know how I feel. Perhaps you can relate. Or perhaps I'm blind.

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passing shadows
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1 posted 2003-12-06 03:20 AM


I know how you feel
SharaRose
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2 posted 2003-12-06 03:28 AM


So true. Being ignored is cruel. Making someone feel they have no worth is heartless. Been where you are, and you wonder where their humanity went? sending a hug. I know how this is so hurtful.
Love,
Terri~

Well I will go down with this ship
And I won't put my hands up and surrender...Dido

Sunnyone
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3 posted 2003-12-06 03:58 AM


Or just perhaps we all get that lost when we fall in love.....excellent write, and really could identify with this one!  ~S~

Life is what you make it
Don't let it make you...

SuperGlueRyan
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4 posted 2003-12-07 01:28 AM


I appreciate the responses. Love seems to be one of most difficult things to comprehend, but when the day is done it is one of the most beautiful things to behold. We need to learn to let go of our fears, and trust one another. This can be one of the most difficult things to do. However, as I'm noticing, it is far easier to let someone in your heart than to let them out. This person is thankfully someone that I never want to let out of my heart, nor I out of her's. Good times.

~Ryan

Allysa
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5 posted 2003-12-07 04:28 PM


don't let her out of your heart.   she won't let you out of hers.  Ever. she agrees that you need to trust each other, and she loves you.
Allysa
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6 posted 2003-12-07 04:29 PM


oh, and you'll always be my world, or atleast a major part of it.
garysgirl
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7 posted 2003-12-07 04:54 PM


Ryan, love is beautiful, isn't it?
Best wishes with your she!!  
Hugs to you both,  
Ethel

SuperGlueRyan
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8 posted 2003-12-08 01:02 AM


I know that she loves me, sometimes I forget. It's so hard to let her go and let her do what she wants. Especially when I so terrified of losing her.
Allysa
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9 posted 2003-12-08 02:28 PM


Don't be scared.  You can't get rid of me that easily.  
littlewing
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10 posted 2003-12-08 04:11 PM


ahh Ryan
I say YES YES YES

Do you know what it's like to be held up to be knocked down?
Do you know what it's like to be the King of your world one day, the court jester the next?
Do you know what it's like to see the truth, but refuse to accept it, because just maybe your wrong?


mann this I relate to so well
nice punch
*smile*

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