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Snow
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desert flower looking for rain

0 posted 2003-12-06 03:06 AM



soulflections

the fingers
of your moondance  
rose pebbled fleshfire
fantasies to the surface
long forgotten
  quickly learned
student of fixation
concentration
  tingle tangle
touching me
softly
  you, like the moon jumper
refuse to concede
till we sleep
  without resolutions
for tomorrow
  tomorrow  
keeps itself tightly wrapped
hidden within the refrains
of sapphire silk
   damp
nights
and lightning
just beyond the arc
of belief

©snow'03

soulflections

soulflections mp3

"...why does my skeleton pursue me
if my soul has fallen away?"
~p.neruda


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1 posted 2003-12-06 03:14 AM


truly awesome

you are a joy to read

garysgirl
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2 posted 2003-12-06 11:56 AM


This is so beautiful. I'm sending it back
to the front for another round.
Hugs  
Ethel

Edder
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3 posted 2003-12-06 01:27 PM


you do have a way with words...
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
4 posted 2003-12-06 02:15 PM


Gawd how I love the way you write!
Excellent ...simply the best!
Hugs~

~ Let peace begin with me...

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