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adbdesperado18
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since 2003-11-30
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0 posted 2003-12-06 12:32 PM


Here,
Standing before me,
Appears a figure of perfection,
Eyes,
Lightest of the light,
Shimmering like diamonds
Amidst  darkness of the night,
Soft lips,
Ideally heart shaped,
Skin,
Gleaming with radiance,
Flowing chestnut hair,
Lying gingerly
Upon her shoulders,
But only I see,
The deep cracks
Her crimson lips
Suffer from,
Induced by burns
Received from murderous winds,
Jagged scars,
Inhabiting every inch of skin,
Created by
Claw-like branches
Of gnarled trees,
Tearing,
At her already mangled body,
Hair,
Thoroughly incinerated
From fires blazing around her,
Her glimmering pale eyes,
Filled with tears
From crisp, cold air,
And
Brutal, relentless beatings
She endures,
Each,
And every day,
For the heroine she portrays,
And the act she plays,
Tells you nothing of the sort.

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