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EagleOne
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Between a laugh and a tear...

0 posted 2003-12-05 06:32 PM



Just Another Day In The Life!


Not quite lovers
Yet more than friends
Undecided moments
Brought us the end

A forbidden kiss
A bold caress
Left hearts and minds
In casual undress

There was a little more
Than a passing glance
Not quite ships in the night
But it was our chance

In your eyes I saw
Your love and fear
And in that instant I knew
I couldn’t let you near

‘Twas all to brief
Those thoughts entertained
Just more voided moments
Eternally dipped in pain

"A spring shower was cause to run
Until you twirled me in the rain" ~ BDC

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Enchantress
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2003-12-05 06:44 PM


Excellent write Eddie...
So good to read you here once more!
Hugs~

~ Let peace begin with me...

garysgirl
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2 posted 2003-12-05 06:49 PM


Eagle, this was kind of sad. Sounds like it could
have been much more. Do you ever wonder if
it could have been?
Hugs  
Ethel

SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19
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Somewhere out there~
3 posted 2003-12-05 07:02 PM


So sad..but they say there's a reason for everything. Maybe we just don't always know the why.
Love,
Terri~

Well I will go down with this ship
And I won't put my hands up and surrender...Dido

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
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By the Seaside
4 posted 2003-12-05 09:04 PM


There was a little more
Than a passing glance
Not quite ships in the night
But it was our chance

So close and yet so far away,
makes me sigh so bad.     

Really nice to read you here again
~Take good care EagleOne~


passing shadows
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5 posted 2003-12-06 03:22 AM


ouch

maybe one day, you'll forego brevity

Midnitesun
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Gaia
6 posted 2003-12-06 11:56 AM


Eddie, I'm sorry it didn't work out. But maybe the timing just wasn't right.
Anyway, good to see you posting again.

EagleOne
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Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...
7 posted 2003-12-07 05:21 PM


Enchantress ~ It’s always good to get back, even better to finally have something flow from my pen.

Ethel ~ Yes! It could have been & yes I wonder.

Terri ~ I agree, and I think we rarely see the why!

BluesSerenade ~ ‘Tis a familiar sigh my friend, and it’s good to be read by you, take care!

passing shadows ~ Maybe one day my friend, thanks!

Midnitesun ~ that’s been the sory of my life…


I thank you all for the welcome. It’s good to be back!

"A spring shower was cause to run
Until you twirled me in the rain" ~ BDC

Lone Wolf
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8 posted 2003-12-07 09:35 PM


Sad one, Eddie.  Funny how those things seem to go that way, isn't it?  Nice to see you.

"When your life is tossed and turning
And you are on the raging sea I'll come and pull you from the water Then you will know that you are free" - MWS

[This message has been edited by Lone Wolf (12-07-2003 09:35 PM).]

EagleOne
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Between a laugh and a tear...
9 posted 2003-12-10 07:35 AM


And good to see you again, thanks for stopping by!

"A spring shower was cause to run
Until you twirled me in the rain" ~ BDC

Paula Finn
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missouri
10 posted 2003-12-10 10:47 AM


I very much remember this feeling...and still wish for the happy ending
Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
11 posted 2003-12-10 01:26 PM


So close ~ and yet so far! ... but a moment remembered.


EA

EagleOne
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Between a laugh and a tear...
12 posted 2003-12-13 10:14 PM


Paula, EA, thanks for stopping by. Always appreciate your thoughts.

"A spring shower was cause to run
Until you twirled me in the rain" ~ BDC

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