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inkedgoddess
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0 posted 2003-12-05 04:55 PM



Seascapes and
sunsets paper the
walls where pretty
landscapes live
only on canvas,
candlelight beomes
moonlight and she
wishes for more,
but knows why,
on each breath
both secrecy and fear
of exposure live, as
she goes home and
washes him off again,
saved and damned
on the same afternoon
in a 3 star hotel,
trying to remind
herself that there
is no judgment in
the Tao


[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (12-05-2003 07:36 PM).]

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Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2003-12-05 05:36 PM


inkedgoddess
A bubble in the effervescence of your life.
Enjoyed.

BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
2 posted 2003-12-05 08:27 PM



This is so fine, and all too real.
You know that I know, doncha?  

candlelight beomes
moonlight and she
wishes for more

Really nice writing girlie~


Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow
3 posted 2003-12-05 11:55 PM


very well done..i should say..
passing shadows
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4 posted 2003-12-06 02:51 AM



bklynboy
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5 posted 2003-12-08 08:04 AM


HMMMMM.......lot said in a small space.
garysgirl
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6 posted 2003-12-08 09:26 AM


Michele, this happens more than people
realize......

littlewing
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7 posted 2003-12-08 04:09 PM


Michele?

there isnt . . .



God this writing is just . . .

beautiful

inkedgoddess
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8 posted 2003-12-09 06:59 AM


thanks for reading,
sue.....sure hope so, thanks

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