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duckysgirl
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since 2003-11-19
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0 posted 2003-12-05 04:20 PM



Little Girls

I hear you talking in your room
and there isn't anyone there.
Then i realise that this new found friend ,
is a doll with curly brown hair.

You love to dress up..
put my makeup on too,
your lips are bright red...
and your eyeshadow.. blue.

I wish i could keep you this way
keep you my baby, each and every day.
I hope you will realise...
after you grow up and leave,
no matter how old you are..
my baby you'll be.

Duckysgirl

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1 posted 2003-12-08 07:23 PM


Excellent!  
WhiteRose
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2 posted 2003-12-10 08:30 AM


aw, this is really cute. I've got one that's 25, and he'll always be to me, that little boy who played He-Man in his room, talking of conquering the world. It's a Mom thing.

My daughter who is 12, going on 21, is growing up way too fast.

Enjoyed the read of this.

dingusjr
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since 2003-09-24
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3 posted 2003-12-10 09:38 AM


A father thing, too.
Aimster
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since 2000-02-19
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Charlotte, NC
4 posted 2003-12-10 09:55 AM


beautiful write from your heart.
*sighs* wish they could stay little
forever I know.
take care,
amy

"love is like a butterfly--
if you chase it,
it will surely fly away,instead
hold it close and watch it grow into
something beautiful"
~me~

Earth Angel
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5 posted 2003-12-10 10:01 AM


My two daughters will always be my babies as well ~ even though they are each 5'10" and taller than I am! Yes, I now have to look up at my "babies"!

A beautiful write that I can identify with ~ and very much so!

Warm hugs 'n smiles,
EA

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