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BloomingRose
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since 2000-08-09
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Florida

0 posted 2003-12-05 03:09 PM


Stolen Moments
~*~

The fading sun hides in the arms of the trees
my room grows coldly dim
then a tall thin shadow falls before spinning eyes
it's only an approaching dream
and I think you don't belong here
but this is my stolen moment
a certain time
I reserve
for you


BloomingRose


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duckysgirl
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since 2003-11-19
Posts 26
Down South
1 posted 2003-12-05 03:37 PM


Nicely done...i enjoyed this.

Duckysgirl

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2003-12-05 03:40 PM


Nice...James
Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
3 posted 2003-12-05 04:29 PM


BloomingRose - those stolen moments can be most precious, yes they can...

BC

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
4 posted 2003-12-05 04:30 PM


Very lovely Deb..has a romantic, haunting feel to it.
Much enjoyed.
Hugs~

~ Let peace begin with me...

Aimster
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since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC
5 posted 2003-12-14 06:09 PM


wow, what a lucky person
they are! *sighs*, beautiful
write dear.
happy holidays,
amy

"love is like a butterfly--
if you chase it,
it will surely fly away,instead
hold it close and watch it grow into
something beautiful"
~me~

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