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Serena Renae
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since 2003-12-04
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0 posted 2003-12-05 12:50 PM


Your gentleness touches my heart,
As the morning dew is touched by the sun.
From you I know I cannot remain apart,
The depths of my soul knows you are the one.

Your eyes capture my passionate gaze,
As leaves are captured by the wind.
My body's afire with a burning blaze,
I yearn for your closeness again and again.

Your skin is as satin when laid against mine,
Your lips are the sweetest to taste.
I know this is the truest love I shall find,
And one I never intend to just waste.

I need your love, as I need life,
I crave it more with each passing day.
Our being together has ended all strife,
And I am so thankful we've found our way.


© Copyright 2003 Renae Wilkerson - All Rights Reserved
duckysgirl
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since 2003-11-19
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Down South
1 posted 2003-12-05 12:52 PM


I thank God each day that i am lucky enough to know this feeling as well.

God Bless,
Duckysgirl

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
2 posted 2003-12-05 12:56 PM


this gives me hope

thanks for sharing

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
3 posted 2003-12-05 05:05 PM


Serena - lovely soft write of feelings, liked this a lot...

BC

SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19
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Somewhere out there~
4 posted 2003-12-05 05:34 PM


Very sweet, and full of faith of what is to be. Very nice to read.
Love,
Terri~

Well I will go down with this ship
And I won't put my hands up and surrender...Dido

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
5 posted 2003-12-05 05:41 PM


Serena,
A very passionate write. Enjoyed.

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
6 posted 2003-12-05 06:03 PM


Very very beautiful...much enjoyed the romantic touch.
Hugs~

~ Let peace begin with me...

Nightshade
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just out of reach
7 posted 2003-12-05 07:56 PM


Lovely, soft write. Enjoyed. Chris

"At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet."
-Plato



    

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