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garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

0 posted 2003-12-05 12:01 PM

*~~~~*
When the weather is getting cold
and I walk across carpet on floor
Sudden shock runs through me
when I touch metal knobs on a door

And when my skin your fingertips touch gently
it feels like a bolt of electricity
Running through me from head to toe
making me tingle unexpectedly

This chemistry felt between the two of us
is something else to feel and see
It even floats across a crowded room
from me to you and you to me

Yes, we can feel the electrical shocks
with an irresistible force between
As we gaze into each others eyes
with more love than we either have seen
*~~~~*

wintertao
Member

since 2003-11-17

Posts 366
Okaloosa Island, FL

1 posted 2003-12-05 12:06 PM

very cool....er hot!
a poem tesla would love....as do I

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

2 posted 2003-12-05 12:14 PM

Thanks Wintertao. I'm glad that
you liked it.

Hugs

Ethel

SharaRose
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

3 posted 2003-12-05 12:30 PM

I enjoyed this so much...very nice the electricity you two have...Sweet!

Love,
Terri~

Well I will go down with this ship
And I won't put my hands up and surrender...Dido

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2003-12-05 01:00 PM

hehehe...this time of year I have to shock my daughter on purpose...hehehe

NewEnglandlazurlu
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-01-04

Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise

5 posted 2003-12-05 03:05 PM

What an incredible creative and clever write, Ethel.

I liked this very much.

Hugs, Marti

'You cannot shake hands with a clenched fist.'
PEACE!!!
Indira Gandhi

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

6 posted 2003-12-05 04:55 PM

garysgirl - yes, a romantic you are, but careful for here comes the zappppppppp!!!!!

BC

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2003-12-05 06:16 PM

I liked this one Ethel...there are shocks and then there are SHOCKS !
Personally I prefer the ones given by two in love.

Hugs sweet lady~

~ Let peace begin with me...

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

8 posted 2003-12-06 01:14 PM

(smiles) Oh Ethel, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I am sooooooo happy for you and I wish for the electricity to ignite a candle in your heart that glows for eternity! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

Hockeychick19
Member

since 2002-10-29

Posts 430
Massachusetts, USA

9 posted 2003-12-06 04:13 PM

Ethel,

Love it... Well done.

~Kelly~

Life is a gift so live it to the fullest!

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