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Professor Gloom
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of Depression

0 posted 2003-12-05 06:30 AM


Cold air creeps,
Slowly stealing and peeling,
My mind seeps
Touch dying,
Freeze the fears and flowing tears
Of crying.
Sensations,
Thoughts are lifting and drifting
Emotions.

The air fills
Quickly cluttered dark with white
Touching cheeks,
And flowing
Another teardrop in night
The skin chills

Gloom


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Gaia
1 posted 2003-12-05 07:02 AM


may the morning sun warm your face and heart

a good sad write

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
2 posted 2003-12-05 08:04 AM


Professor,
Now that's gloom if I ever read it.

passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2003-12-06 02:38 AM


and I feel it
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Near golden sunsets
4 posted 2003-12-10 05:05 PM


I always like reading yours.  Your form is very refreshing, as is the thought behind your content.  Great to read you!
Toerag
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Ala bam a
5 posted 2003-12-10 05:08 PM


Interesting write Gloom...as always..
WhiteRose
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somebody's dungeon
6 posted 2003-12-10 05:30 PM


Hiya gloomy

It's been a gloomy day here in the South. Perfect weather for this gloomy read. I've missed reading you.

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