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walking on sharp rocks
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia 
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Walking on sharp rocks or shattered eggshells makes my sole sore, less willing to move forward to the next step. But masochist that I am, (or merely an optimist?) I am forever believing in self-healing, so repeatedly I lunge, take the plunge even knowing I might drown again or find myself scraped clean upon Life’s coral reef as it lies in wait just below the surface, beyond my consciousness, my senses. But I would not have it any other way. [This message has been edited by Midnitesun (12-05-2003 05:47 PM).] |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
“But masochist that I am, (or merely an optimist?”) --Really like that thought. “so repeatedly I lunge, take the plunge even knowing I might drown again or find myself scraped clean upon Life’s coral reef as it lies in wait just below the surface, beyond my consciousness, my senses.” --I love the determination and abandonment of these lines. --But especially like the ending: “But I would not have it any other way” |
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pandonov Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 478b/w conscience and insolence |
happy to see an optimistic soul  |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
As long as it doesnt make your "soul" too sore |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Dang, we're all into self-flagellation tonight -- welcome to the club! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Good Lord, Kacy I do believe you crept into my mind tonight I'll go with masochist . . . *smile* xxoo |
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C? Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 190 |
ta daa~!! I like it, I like it very....very much. I like wordy poems that are not too wordy...this has a nice balance...very nice |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you make me smile |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
there is indeed a fine line between masochist and optimist.  enjoyed this view All of my impurities are right here on my sleeve. This is Me"---Faith Hill |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
thanks friends! you help make it easier to keep stepping through the rocks (and steaven, thank you for pointing out my misspelled word in a gentle, subtle way  ) |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
NIce writing...James |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Oh, I like this. No more, no less, I just like it. A poem doesn't need any more success than that, does it? |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"But masochist that I am, (or merely an optimist?" -- This was so profound a thought! I really liked your writing. PS: Thanks for posting to my "Thawing Out." |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
thank you each, for helping to smoothe the rough edges of life |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
We all have those edges that need to be smoothed over, but in the end we are the only ones who can polish the shine, with a little help from our friends. (of course) This struck a mighty chord for me! Thank you Kacy for all your good thoughts, I continue to gather strength from your wise words. *Cheers* and Happy Holidays to you. |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
hugssss Kacy, I always love reading you!! Lauren~ ~~**~~**~~**~~**~~ |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Blueseygal, thanks! I appreciate your taking time to read, and reply. I always enjoy reading your musing thoughts too!  Lauren, than you so much! I read everything you post. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Perfect ending Kacy, very well done! Happy holidays. |
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