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jaicie114
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since 2003-09-27
Posts 750
On the edge of forever

0 posted 2003-12-04 09:32 PM


This time…
   just this once,
I will enter
   your soul,
And lie
   peacefully…
       deeply….
In the essence of you.

I will listen
   to your heart.
I will caress
   your spirit.
I will give to you
So you may
    give to me.
So we may
Experience
    infinity…
       together.

I will whisper
   the words of love,
And will hear
   the sounds
      of eternity…
Lost in your soul,
   wandering the path
      of bliss…
With no intent
   to find myself…
      ever.

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

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Obscurity
Member
since 2003-12-04
Posts 153
In A Melancholic Dream
1 posted 2003-12-04 09:41 PM


Sometimes it's true, that anyone can be lost in the tempest of love. It was a beautiful poem.
jaicie114
Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750
On the edge of forever
2 posted 2003-12-04 09:52 PM


Thank you, Obscurity...

I'm glad you enjoyed this.

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
3 posted 2003-12-04 10:25 PM


Your love poetry was tender and delicate...soft...as a whisper!

~ARH

True poets don't write with the ink of quill or pen, but with the ink of their heart~

jaicie114
Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750
On the edge of forever
4 posted 2003-12-04 10:45 PM


ARH...

Thank you so much for your sweet comment.

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
5 posted 2003-12-05 12:14 PM


Lovely...James
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
6 posted 2003-12-05 03:58 AM


what a fine last line!
jaicie114
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since 2003-09-27
Posts 750
On the edge of forever
7 posted 2003-12-05 11:37 AM


James and passing...

So glad you enjoyed. This one is actually a fairly old write...but, still one of my favorites!

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

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