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duckysgirl
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since 2003-11-19
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0 posted 2003-12-04 02:19 PM



               I love a woman.
           "So what" is what i say.
           Am i supposed to apologize
            for loving her this way?

             So it's not the norm.  
               Never said i was.
          But do you have to ridicule,
               gossip and scorn?  

             I love this woman.
              What am i to do?
               My answer is ...
                  Nothing.

              because this woman...
                loves me too!!!!!
  

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Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
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1 posted 2003-12-04 02:22 PM


I dont think we should ever apologize for loving someone.  Nice write.  Welcome to passions, enjoy your time here.
duckysgirl
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since 2003-11-19
Posts 26
Down South
2 posted 2003-12-04 02:31 PM


Gentle Spirit,

Thanks so much for my first reply to my first post.

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Member Rara Avis
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In Your Poetic Mind
3 posted 2003-12-04 02:53 PM


Hi and Welcome to Passions, we are glad you are here to enjoy the poetry, and make friends.....beautiful first post, as love is a precious thing!


please check your email for a special greeting


Kindly

Greeneyes~

I would rather have one breath of his hair,
one kiss of his mouth,
one touch of his hand
than an eternity without it.

Jes
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since 2003-10-21
Posts 422
Denmark
4 posted 2003-12-04 05:06 PM


Why should anyone ever apologise for having a heart, and let another feel it.

No matter if norm or not, a heart is a heart.

So you go girl give her the feeling to be loved, i really liked this poem it moves borders.

Smile

Jes


James_A_Fraser
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since 2003-09-03
Posts 972
Out Making Anticlines
5 posted 2003-12-04 05:09 PM


So do I, so I don't mind at all....



~~J

Ada'doLisdo'ti
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since 2002-12-10
Posts 123
California
6 posted 2003-12-04 07:01 PM


Nice right, Love is something special, you find it with who its suposed to be with...age, color, sex...the heart knows not these things...

The sweetest rose is one you'll die for...

KoKo
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since 2003-02-15
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Inside the shadow's shadow
7 posted 2003-12-04 09:33 PM


Welcome to Passions!
^_^
I'm glad you used this for your debut.
I wrote something along this subject once...
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Welcome, again!

[This message has been edited by KoKo (12-04-2003 09:34 PM).]

Obscurity
Member
since 2003-12-04
Posts 153
In A Melancholic Dream
8 posted 2003-12-04 09:38 PM


I thought it was a really nice poem, life is rather vexed is it not? I believe that you should never choose to be percieved in a different way, then you truely are.

Nice poem

A Romantic Heart
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Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
9 posted 2003-12-04 09:47 PM


Welcome to passions and love is free...

~ARH

True poets don't write with the ink of quill or pen, but with the ink of their heart~

Midnitesun
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Gaia
10 posted 2003-12-04 09:50 PM


Welcome to Passions!
Love is love.

Mistletoe Angel
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11 posted 2003-12-05 02:29 AM






(big hugggsssssss) It saddens me so much to see people take offense at love between certain people, dearest friend, I believe no love should be denied and never let them get to you and continue to show your love to her, God Bless You, this is a heartfelt debut! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your wonderful words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

C?
Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 190

12 posted 2003-12-05 02:59 AM


Yea, many people don't like waht they dont' understand.
Kinda like Wave-Particle Duality in Quantum Physics. :P This theory, though is prolly one of the most illusive and admired scientific thoeries to date.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
13 posted 2003-12-05 03:01 AM


you are beautiful... no wonder she loves you
duckysgirl
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since 2003-11-19
Posts 26
Down South
14 posted 2003-12-05 09:54 AM


Thank you all so much for your kind words. I don't think i have ever felt so welcome anywhere else before. Noah...thank you for the beautiful picture.

God Bless You All,
Duckysgirl

[This message has been edited by duckysgirl (12-05-2003 09:54 AM).]

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