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GG
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since 2002-12-03

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Lost in thought

0 posted 2003-12-04 01:46 PM

When I take my final breath
And slip into the hands of death
I know that tears may seize your eyes
And it’s ok for you to cry…

Though my years were very few
They were filled by joys of you
And though we have regrets and shame
There’s no reason for laying blame.

So when you cry, don’t let it last.
Live you future, not my past.
Besides, we still are not apart…
I stay within your very heart.

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

[This message has been edited by GG (12-04-2003 02:42 PM).]

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

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1 posted 2003-12-04 01:48 PM

Very good Alyssa. From your heart to your pen..

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

2 posted 2003-12-04 01:59 PM

yes, you will always be in my heart

Jes
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since 2003-10-21

Posts 422
Denmark

3 posted 2003-12-04 02:35 PM

Hmmmmmm

As told from up above .....
To love is just to love.

sad but with a great touch on the soul.

Smile

Jes

GG
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since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

4 posted 2003-12-04 03:08 PM

Gentle,
Thats the way a poem should be

I'm glad you think thats how mine is, for that is how it was meant... thanks much.

Jes,
and yes to love can be so much more

and yes this may be sad, but glad you see more then that, thank you.

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

GG
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since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

5 posted 2003-12-04 03:10 PM

Dix,

don't cry now... for you will always be in my heart too. And this was just written in light of my health, I'm never really too sure now with the way things are... but likely everything will be just fine. No tears!

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

Aimster
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since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

6 posted 2003-12-05 09:03 AM

Alyssa,

excellent penning, straight from
the heart...you always write it
heart and soul, and though this was
sad indeed, I saw a shimmer of light
in it as well.
take care.
amy

"love is like a butterfly--
if you chase it,
it will surely fly away,instead
hold it close and watch it grow into
something beautiful"
~me~

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

7 posted 2003-12-05 04:25 PM

GG - yes, you do write from the heart...

BC

GG
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since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

8 posted 2003-12-07 01:47 PM

Aimster,
You always reply with kindness, thank you

and yes, there is some light here... you take care, too.

Bill,
that is a huge compliment, to me

thank you very much...

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

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