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Goldenrose
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0 posted 2003-12-04 09:28 AM


I walk the streets alone,into the dark of the night.
Your stunning beauty, fills my mind and thoughts,burning an indelible mark upon my memory.

Through cold fog, clinging to me, gripping me, holding me fast, inside i shine a light, piercing and serene blue,it shines for you, lovingly.

My footsteps beat out a rythym.
Global my love is, universal,but my brand of love has her's and only her's on the box.

Love, desire, and passion is what i feel when i see her smiling face.
My mind allows me to think of our life together,
inseperable we would be,like a vixen and her male fox.

I whisper words of love to you, dreaming your sweet dreams, i hear you sigh contentedly,a dream of you and me.

Awake my sweet lady, in the still silence of early morn, i will lay by your side and peer into your eyes,knowing that for me your love will be.

Tracing my fingers slowly down your bare arm, you thrill at my touch, i thrill at the vision that is you.

My love is yours, no matter what time, whatever you do.

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Brad Majors
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Georgia
1 posted 2003-12-04 09:50 AM


pretty piece
passing shadows
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SharaRose
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3 posted 2003-12-04 02:08 PM


Romantic, lovely, sweet sentiments. Nice to read.
Love,
Terri~

Well I will go down with this ship
And I won't put my hands up and surrender...Dido

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4 posted 2003-12-04 02:09 PM


This is a smile waiting to warm a heart..
this is simply loving and tender.  Very well done.

A Romantic Heart
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5 posted 2003-12-04 04:12 PM



Phil...This was so awesome, especially writing it so quickly after our phone conversation last night..(thank you for it and glad I am your muse!).and I got the best gift of hearing you read it to me over the phone this morning....Brilliantly done...breathtaking your love is to me..I LOVE IT! but not as much as I love you!~

xxxxxxxxxxx ~ARH (Your Vermilion Queen)


True poets don't write with the ink of quill or pen, but with the ink of their heart~

[This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (12-04-2003 04:13 PM).]

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6 posted 2003-12-04 06:17 PM


enjoyed
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