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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2003-12-04 07:27 AM


The letter

I sighed each word upon the page
To wage a way upon the stage
To greet you in the mornings dew
To meet you in a phantoms coup

To snip the skins that holds us tight
To slip away into the night
Greet you by an Eden’s stream
Fill the pleasures of a dream

Offer you a snow-white dove
Held upon a velvet glove
Give to you my love in rhyme
Endeavor in forever’s time

Kiss your face in hearts embrace
Cover you with lover’s lace
To sail the ship of ecstasy
Into the eights eternity

To deal with me and seek the sun
To seal the two and make them one



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LeeJ
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1 posted 2003-12-04 07:38 AM


Give to you my love in rhyme
Endeavor in forever’s time

Hiya Sy and a jolly good morning to ya

Extremely loving words you have woven here
which sooth the heart and mind...convincingly
that there is not only hope for romance and relationships of all kinds...but to, for humankind...this whispers what genuine guests we are...here on earth...reaping the glow of poetry...rhyme...and a musical place of caring minds.  Thank you!

Love to you and yours

kaleanna
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2 posted 2003-12-04 07:39 AM


very nice writing Seymour
Meesh

scorpio
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right...there
3 posted 2003-12-04 08:40 AM


Very romantic write Sy.

believe in what your heart feels...

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
4 posted 2003-12-04 08:41 AM


Very beautiful the contents of this 'letter' Sy!
Lovely rhyme and flow in this piece.
I'm off and running Christmas shopping...
Ah, but I do have time for tea for two!
~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~

~ Let peace begin with me...

Ericc
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5 posted 2003-12-04 09:24 AM


Lyrical and lovely.

Eric

Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2003-12-04 09:50 AM


LeeJ
Thank you sweety, enjoyed your reply.

kaleanna
Thank you for the nice.

scorpio
Yes it was,

Nancy,
Enjoy the shopping, no tea today.

Eric,
Thanks for the lovely.

Earth Angel
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7 posted 2003-12-04 09:55 AM


Good morning, dear love sonneteer divine!

"I (literally!) sighed each word upon the page" ....



Angel hugs & kisses,
EA



Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 2003-12-04 10:28 AM


Earth Angel
Now that was a sigh I listened for.

Janet Marie
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9 posted 2003-12-04 11:30 AM


To snip the skins that holds us tight
To slip away into the night
Greet you by an Eden’s stream
Fill the pleasures of a dream

=========================
Kiss your face in hearts embrace
Cover you with lover’s lace
To sail the ship of ecstasy
Into the eights eternity

To deal with me and seek the sun
To seal the two and make them one

====================


To snip the skins that holds us tight

*smiling at you*
that line will be me way cool winkie line of the day.
and could that closing couplet be any cooler?? ...


To seal the two and make them one


as only you could sweey Sy-guy...
as only you could.

I've missed you and Randy...and your winkies.*L*

When I'm with you my eyes are so wide ...
you reached right in my head and turned on the light inside
turned on the light in my mind.

David Gray

Aimster
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10 posted 2003-12-04 11:50 AM


sy,

you never cease to amaze me, your
words just seem to float off the page,
the ending of this was simply beautiful!
take care,
amy

"love is like a butterfly--
if you chase it,
it will surely fly away,instead
hold it close and watch it grow into
something beautiful"
~me~

Seymour Tabin
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11 posted 2003-12-04 12:10 PM


JM,
And I missed you more then I'd care to say.
WWRS

Aimster
You are kind.

suthern
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12 posted 2003-12-04 01:11 PM


What beautiful romance you've written, my friend. *S*
Seymour Tabin
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13 posted 2003-12-04 02:22 PM


suthern
Thank you love.

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